Sales Page Review from experienced, qualified copywriter (me) – £97
Video review of your sales page or brochure – plus whatever runway you’ve built for it (lead magnet, email sequence, launch emails)
Actionable ideas to make your copy more effective – or your money back
This is for you if you’re an online service provider or coach and…
Your sales copy isn’t getting the results you wanted/expected
You’re about to launch something new and want fresh eyes to check the sales copy is as good as it can be.
Your copy seems to be working, and you’re curious to know if there’s any room for improvement.
Got a lacklustre sales page you’d rather keep hidden?
I’ve noticed that online service providers and coaches often have sales pages that undersell their abilities, their work, and the value they deliver.
They don’t want to feel pushy or manipulative, but they’ve leaned too far in the other direction.
The result is a sales page that humbly mumbles about what’s included in the package/offer, but it doesn’t fairly represent the value, the provider/coach’s personality, or what it’s like to work with them.
It’s a bit like party details scribbled on a dirty napkin. You have the facts you need to decide if you’re in or out, but it doesn’t feel like much of an invitation.
This isn’t good for the business owner, because they are missing out on clients.
But it’s not good for the reader either, because they aren’t getting a fair chance to decide for themselves if this offer, from this provider, is right for them right now.
What I’m looking for during a review
I’ll review your sales page and create a video outlining what’s working, what’s not, and the 3-5 most impactful changes the sales page needs.
When I review a sales page, I am looking for:
- How to make it easier for the right-fit people to understand what the offer is, appreciate its value, and buy it
- How the reader feels throughout the page – for example, is the page building trust and a sense of togetherness, or does it generate feelings of shame or pressure?
- How the business owner’s voice and personality is expressed throughout the page – does it sound like them? Does it feel consistent with the marketing that comes before the sales page, and the post-purchase experience?
About AI
If you’ve used AI to write your sales page or not, you’re still very welcome to buy this service.
It’s also fine if you’ve used someone else’s training or templates to write it.
Or you worked with another copywriter.
I will be looking for the same things no matter what your sales page’s origin story looks like.
What you’ll get…
Video of feedback - could be 5 minutes, could be 30
I don’t try to stick to a target time, and I don’t edit the video down.
The screen-share video recording will be me, talking out loud, as I look at your sales page, so you can see where I get stuck or confused, which bits are easy to understand – it gives you the chance to see your sales page as a potential client would.
I’ll share my perspective of what the reader will be experiencing, things that I think are working well, and opportunities I’ve spotted for improvement.
Sales Page Action Plan
A text summary of suggested changes with the highest-priority, most impactful changes highlighted.
I’m not aiming to deliver a hefty list of changes to make my service look valuable.
I’m focused on finding the most impactful changes you can make to improve the results you are getting from this sales copy.
7-days Voxer support
After the initial enthusiasm about the video and report has worn off, you’ll probably have questions – so I’ve included a 7-day support window.
And if you make changes during those 7 days, I’m happy to take another look at your sales page and send feedback.
A gentle, supportive way to encourage you to take action following my review.
Hi, I’m Laura…
and I’ve worked in marketing my whole adult life, including:
- Working on the launch of insurance quote-generating websites during my corporate job (it was more fun than it sounds)
- Freelance website usability testing
- 15 years writing copy for sales pages and launches.
- 9 years mentoring dozens of expertise-based business owners to help them create, market, and sell their offers.
Here’s how this works:
1 – Click ‘buy now’ and complete the checkout
2 – Complete the form so I have the info I need to complete your review (there’s a link to the form on the Thank You page after checkout, and I’ll email a link to you – so if you don’t have time to fill it out now, you can come back to it later. Your Copy Review must be submitted within 30 days of purchase.)
3 – During my next 1-1 Week, I will review the info you sent me and the sales copy you sent me – This will be during the dates specified at the top of this page, and on the checkout.
4 – I email you a link to a screen share video of me talking through your sales copy, with suggestions of how to improve it
5 – You have a 7-day window, after I send the feedback video, to reply to me with follow-up questions
Sales Page Review
£97
Asynchronous Feedback
No need to book an appointment.
You fill out the form at a time that’s convenient for you.
I record the video at a time that’s convenient for me.
You have a 7-day window to send me follow-up questions via Voxer.
Actionable ideas or your money back
If after watching the report, you don’t have £97-worth of actionable ideas to improve the effectiveness of your copy I’ll happily give you your money back – if you request it within 7 days of receiving your Copy Review video.
BTW one of the things I like about working with you is that you break things down and make them easy – which in turn gets me excited (and probably filled with dopamine!) enough to actually start and finish the task.
I’m in love with the feedback, direction, and incredible value you packed into this video, Laura.
“I asked (begged) Laura to help me out with a sales page I was struggling with. I knew what I wanted to say but my gut check told me I was missing something. She spotted the problem within two minutes and fixed it in a flash. It has been the best money I have spent this year. I now try to book her to review every page I write before it goes to the client because there is always something that she can see that takes the copy to another level.”
FAQs
Will you re-write my sales copy for me?
I might suggest alternative phrasing when I’m speaking during the video, but no, I won’t be rewriting your copy.
Check my Solutions page for my current copywriting services (done-for-you and done-together). If you buy a review and then choose to work with me 1-1 within 30 days, I’ll discount that purchase by £9.
Does the price point of my product matter?
Do I need to give you access to the product?
It’s not a MUST, but the sales page is for a course or membership it would be a huge help if you give temporary access, so I can have a quick skim at what’s included and see what you’ve left off the sales page.
I have a question that’s not answered here.
Great – your questions help me make my sales pages better, so I definitely want to hear them, and there’ll be no pressure for you to buy if/when we talk.
Voxer me (username worditude) or email laura@worditude.co.uk